Carl
I would like to thank you for your assistance with my resume.  I thought I would let you know about my performance since. I applied for and got the internship as a Financial Analyst. They commented on the impressive resume and cover letter in the interview. I have also had a great strike rate with graduate program applications, progressing to the final selection stages of the graduate programs for 5 out of the 6 companies that I applied for. Of those companies, I got to final interview stage with two - the Financial Assurance graduate program with one of the big four accounting firms and the Business Banking graduate program for one of the big four banks. The bank has now offered me a position that I have accepted. Once again, I would like to like say thank you for your amazing help in preparing an outstanding resume. It has been an excellent tool that has assisted me in achieving such an amazing graduate program.